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My son is in the process of writing his personal statement to apply for uni next year.


He has completed it and had it checked, but he just needs to tweek the following statement:



"Another attribute I believe to have shown is dedication and commitment; this is because I had to commute about an hour to and from college each day"



he needs to find a stronger reason for his dedication and commitment.


Any ideas??


He is studying AAT level 3 at college (association of accounting technicians).

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